User talk:Sylvia

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Hey Sylvia! Not sure if this talk page will work... but I deleted "together" on the food page section because I thought that it sounded a little awkward because the sentence already said "with people." There might be a better way to structure the sentence altogether... what do you think?

Yeah, I think that change makes sense. I didn't add the word together, it was already like that. Sylvia (talk) 11:20, 20 August 2013 (EDT)
Oh! I must have read the history wrong, haha. I thought that you had added it. Thanks for letting me know! I'll get better at this :)